Needs a more engaging plot
The story is uninteresting to me -- or maybe I just don't get it. I liked the general style of production however. The voices seemed a bit low in volume to me -- maybe recorded through a cheap mike? My initial reaction would be to compress the audio track and bring the level up, but I know nothing about flash animation and how it uses audio. The sync only got off very slightly near the end.
Finally! A Helpfull Review! Well, I'll think about working on the Plot and Story a bit more before i release my next one, oh, and I am planning on getting a New Microphone sometime in August, so thats nearly taken care of.
-Biological Carrot Productions
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